Narrative

WALT: Write an engaging narrative
I wrote about if Goku didn't win as well as he did against Frieza


Here is my narrative this is not completed

100 years ago Frieza got resurrected by Sorbet he went down to earth and used the dragon balls to resurrect him. But if that happens he would be in pieces but lucky for them they had a regeneration machine. Frieza is an alien that destroys people and makes people there slaves. Once Frieza was resurrected he wanted to head to earth but he knew he would be defeated quickly so instead of heading to earth straight away he decided he would train for 8 months straight once he finished training and made their way to earth.

The Z fighters were warned about Frieza by Jaco, unfortunately Goku and Vegeta were at Beerus's planet training with Whis. Beerus is the God of Destruction and Whis is his angel, he's also his trainer. Frieza had a whole army but they were very weak and easy to take down but Frieza was unstoppable there best chance was Goku and Vegeta to be there Bulma (Vegeta's wife) tried getting Whis’s attention which she did and told them everything but it was too far away so there best chance was Goku to instant transmission but its too far.

On earth the fight was continuing while that's happening on Beerus’s planet Goku  was trying to instant transmission. but there power levels were too low and back on earth Gohan (Goku's son) hated Frieza and what he does but he has hasn’t been training enough so the best he could do is to power up enough so that Goku can lock on and get there instantly once they made it everybody was happy to see them. Frieza was shocked to see them with Whis and Beerus and the instant transmission which gave Frieza even more of a shock “H-How did you do that” yelled Frieza “it's called instant transmission” said Goku then he said “Now you will pay for what you have done”.

The fight has begun and they both were holding back they notice then it all happens they both transformed Frieza turned Golden and changed into Golden Frieza. Goku turned blue and changed into a Super Saiyan God SS but call it Super Saiyan Blue. It got very intense. It was too dangerous for the others to be that close so they moved back. Frieza noticed he still wasn’t using his full power “you too are not using your full power so bring it” yelled Goku. “HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA” yelled Frieza and he power up to platinum Frieza “hehehehehe” laughed Frieza “KAIOKEN” yelled Goku “this still won’t be enough” said Goku “KAIOKEN X10” yelled Goku.

Goku realizes that the earth could be destroyed if they stay on so Goku got an idea to launch them into space he just needs to aim upwards to go all the way up there into space. Frieza saw what he was trying to do “you FOOL” yelled Frieza. He punched him so hard that he flew into the ground from 100,000 feet in the air and it's hard to knock Goku back. “Hehehehehe” this planet is gonna be destroyed “damn you kakarot” said Vegeta, Vegeta flew in and decides to fight Frieza “what are you gonna do weakling” said Frieza “you're underestimating me Frieza” said Vegeta. Vegeta turns Super Saiyan Blue “I guess I was wrong Vegeta you strong but nowhere near as strong as me” said Frieza “VEGETA what are you doing” yelled Goku “hurry up and do your thing” said Vegeta.

Goku knew what he meant so he put his hands up “lend me your energy everybody” said Goku everyone saw what he was doing so they all put their hands up and lend him his energy. But the whole world needs to do the same thing but they weren’t so they had to speak to them “please someone here is stronger than Buu and he could destroy the whole world please lend me all of your so we could defeat him. They listen because the earth is shaking the whole entire time “whoa this thing is bigger than before it is as big as the earth, it's done” said Goku Frieza was shocked to see how big this thing is “NOW DIE FRIEZA!!!!” yelled Goku He throws the spirit bomb and it hits Frieza.

Frieza tries to push it back, it's very strong. Unfortunately he did push it back he was pushing it with one hand and the other charging up an attack to help destroy it “I HATE YOU YOU WILL DIE!!!!” he uses the attack and destroys the spirit bomb “WHAT HOW DID YOU DESTROY IT” yelled Goku “Impossible” said Vegeta everybody was shocked. “It's time for all of you and this planet to die” said Frieza “NOOOOOOO I WON’T LET YOU DESTROY MY WORLD KAIOKEN X20” yelled Goku “you still gonna die” said Frieza “KAIOKEN X50” yelled Goku “NOOOOOOO HE COULD DIE FROM THAT” yelled Vegeta.

Goku charges at Frieza he very fast even for Frieza “WHAT HOW ARE SO FAST BUT YOUR STILL NO MATCH TO ME” yelled Frieza Goku powers down to his base form “NOOOOOOO HE'S OUT OF POWER” yelled Vegeta. Dende is the Earth's guardian “hey Dende can you get the dragon balls and wish Goku's power back” said Vegeta